Analysis of Getting out of bed

Kelley Davies 1983 (Dallas)



I rise slowly

It's hard to alive myself

It would be easier to unalive

And no longer suffer

I pray for my family

I know they would miss me terribly

And even in a world that doesn't seem to care

I would hope to survive myself

Amid the whirlwind of depression


Scheme A B B X A A X B X
Poetic Form
Metre 1110 111011 11110011 011010 1111100 111111100 010001110111 1111011 01011010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 266
Words 60
Sentences 1
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 9
Letters per line (avg) 23
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 23
Words per stanza (avg) 6
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