Analysis of In your vision is God there



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In your vision is God there.

Heavenly Father each day for each of us is a true blessing from you. In the Heavens before you send us down to earth you have our souls in your hands and along with the spark of life you also bury deep within our souls the seed of  being able to keep the full essence of your being as our creator and Savior within our living as we travel through life. When I was a little child even before I was old enough to go to school and even before I was 3yrs old which is before I could be influenced by others ways and means I could feel you in my existence. Looking back now as an adult I could see that you were in me to guide me through life because I would need the way of your Holiness to make it through all the good and bad choices a youngman could face. Let's face it the world to a free young man can be a fully loaded playground of wrong choice.  I did make some wrong choices as I was trying to live and still be true to your desire for me to be a clean young man with a future.  My choices weren't to bad however wrong is wrong and I always felt your gentle touch guiding me back to you  through the desire to please you. The desire I've had my entire life to remain close to you has kept me attached to you and your love and mercy has always given me hope. I don't understand how others don't feel deep within themselves the pull from that seed you planted in them to always remain close to you. Through your love and mercy the many times I have and the many times I will continue to repent I always feel cleansed by you and I'm able to enjoy the blessings you have given me. You are the example of a perfect life and our souls will always be renewed and refreshed through even just your presence.  Thank you Father for your grace and every bit of glory that has ever existed and will exist belongs to you. And like you do help us to always do the right thing  for the love.


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Words 387
Sentences 14
Stanzas 2
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Written on February 23, 2024

Submitted by rjenavy on February 23, 2024

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Richard J Edwards

Retired Navy. Live in Montana. And Love God. In 2004 I wrote and had published by poetry. Com The Truth Of Heart and Soul put in their book "Involving the Muse". This is not my best work. I have 40yrs of writings I know R publish worthy I'm just looking for some to help that knows how to do that. I'm a common man and I believe my writings R easily relatable. more…

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