Analysis of I Just Want You Too (Haiku)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



I Just Want You Too   (Haiku)

I don’t want Jesus
To love me my dear Heather
I just want you too

Edwin Tanguma   aka   Dagesh   2/29/2024


Scheme A XXA X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 1111110 11110 1111110 11111 10010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 141
Words 29
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 33
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

To two too….Jesus only hoped that he was me my dear Heather…Are there still fish in thee sea???Our olive tree is supposed to arrive today…I just don’t know if and or where I/we should plant it…I guess only time will tell…

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Written on February 29, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on February 29, 2024

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