Analysis of Does More Scrambled Eggs Sound Good (Bussokusekika)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Does More Scrambled Eggs Sound Good   (Bussokusekika)

Let’s eat scrambled eggs
With delicious waffle fries
And some tofu wings
With nice crispy onion rings
When the dawn’s early light comes
Does more scrambled eggs sound good

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   3/31/2024


Scheme X XXAAXX X
Poetic Form
Metre 11101111 11101 1010101 01101 1110101 1011011 1110111 10010101
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 274
Words 45
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 6, 1
Lines Amount 8
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 71
Words per stanza (avg) 16

About this poem

This one came to mind after listening to KLOS this morning…So I must give credit where credit is due… https://m.youtube.com/watch?v=UaN64yi3ioc&pp=ygUWc2NyYW1ibGVkIGVnZ3MgYmVhdGxlcw%3D%3D I hope it is not considered plagiarism…I’m just trying to pay my respects to Sir Paul McCartney and Jimmy Fallon…I sure hope Paul is not angry for my suggestion so long ago regarding the rights to the Beatles music and the King of Pop…I just had the silliest thought…I wonder IF Kelly Clarkson’s advice to Taylor Swift might apply to Paul and Ringo???Who knows???

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Written on March 31, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on March 31, 2024

Modified by EdwinRayTanguma on April 01, 2024

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