Analysis of Make Me An Offer (Senryu)

Edwin Tanguma 1966 (CA)



Make Me An Offer   (Senry)

“For sale baby shoes,
Never worn” they come with box
Make me an offer

Edwin Tanguma   Aka   Dagesh   4/6/2024


Scheme A XXA X
Poetic Form Tetractys  (40%)
Metre 111101 11101 1011111 11110 10010101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 142
Words 27
Sentences 1
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 1, 3, 1
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 33
Words per stanza (avg) 11

About this poem

This one is my tribute to Papa Hemingway…I hope I don’t get sued…

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Written on April 06, 2024

Submitted by EdwinRayTanguma on April 06, 2024

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