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Empty Space

Serenity Taylor 2009 (TX city)

Rhymed
Empty space
a happy place
 
Hidden deep inside my brain
 a place that blocks out all the rain
 a space where I can feel no pain.

I can run around
oblivious to any sound
a space where my feelings aren't bound
 
This place isn't so bad
it's a space where I don't have to be so sad.

About this poem

I had made this poem and it's inspired by my daydreams, thought I'd submit it here.

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Written on September 03, 2021

Submitted by Sleepy_sheep on September 03, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BBB CCC DD
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 268
Words 57
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 3, 3, 2
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  • johnwick
    johnwick
    wow this is deep and meangfull
    LikeReply1 year ago

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