Eclipsed Moon

Mahnoor Fatima 2001 (Padidan)



We never tired of walking alone
It’s the expectations of others we own
Life is an expedition
But people make it destination

Dreams don’t tired the eyes
Its peoples’ demands and wishes
We never bored by trying new things
Until we start to take others instructions

We don’t want to live in fairy tale
But escaping from reality we live
We love to move on the path of life
Until we derived by the others “like”

We start journey of life as a driver
And end up as a passenger
We wished to be a radiant sun
But end up an eclipsed moon
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Written on October 14, 2022

Submitted by mahnoorfatimaarain on February 04, 2023

Modified on March 27, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABB XXXX XXXX CCBX
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 542
Words 106
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4

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Iam a student, i study at the university of Shaheed Benazir Bhutto Pakistan. Iam a passionate writer and poet used to write on the human real life expereinces. more…

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