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sometimes i feel you in my heart
others i feel we’re apart
at times i began to wonder
if it’s the rain or the thunder
if i need to let go
or give us time to grow
either way i don’t know
you confuse me with the things you show
i want us to elevate
but lately we been going low
i really hope it’s not too late
for our love to flow

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it’s really simple & somewhat short it could mean many different things depending on the reader/observer it’s simple but deep

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Written on January 29, 2024

Submitted by poeticallyblessed on April 27, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABBCCCCDCDC
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 338
Words 75
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 12

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