Forty Years



Forty years…
of triumphs and mistakes
of heartaches endured
and victories embraced.

Forty years…
of friendships formed
of a great love lost
and a true love found.

Forty years…
of freedom deprived, but restored
of memories forgotten, but renewed
and sacrifices unnoticed and were made astray.

Memories flood with laughter, joy, and tears
The journey we took, the paths we’ve crossed
The regrets, the pains, the shattered moments
All gone, buried under the beaming hope of sweet release.

When we were young, we dreamt of what could be
The world we wanted to explore or to see.
With every single year, we wished for nothing but free
Free from the aching past that stripped our purity.

Each thread of this life embossed our unspoken love
Our longing to feel each other’s majestic woven touch.
But with each passing year, our priorities change and improve.
Our dreams evolved as we learned, grow, and problem solved.

So here's to the next forty years ahead,
With wisdom gained and dreams unread.
May we continue to bury the past, just grow, and thrive,
And keep the flame of hope active and alive.

About this poem

To my past self, present, and future self.

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Written on May 20, 2024

Submitted by Wildflower888 on May 21, 2024

Modified by Wildflower888 on May 25, 2024

1:02 min read
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Quick analysis:

Scheme Axxx Axbx Axxx xbxx cccc xxxx ddee
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 1,117
Words 207
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

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3 Comments
  • Symmetry60
    There's the beautiful mind of my amazing friend. I've missed your talents. This is a lovely recollective piece with much to look forward to. I remember 40 like it was 21 years ago. Good times we had, damn good times. Thanks for the walk down memory lane. :-) 
    LikeReply 18 days ago
    • Wildflower888
      Thank you, my friend. Now, I know how young you are. 21 lol.
      LikeReply 18 days ago
  • AIDA
    What a powerful and reflective poem! The way you captured the ups and downs of forty years with such grace and resilience is truly inspiring. Your words are not only a celebration of the past, but a hopeful and enthusiastic look towards the future. The imagery of memories flooding with laughter, joy, and tears resonates deeply, reminding us of the beauty and complexity of life. Here's to embracing the next forty years with wisdom, courage, and an unwavering flame of hope. This poem is a beautiful reminder to cherish the journey, learn from the past, and keep growing and thriving. Thank you for sharing this heartfelt and uplifting piece! 
    LikeReply12 days ago
  • AIDA
    Wow, what a beautiful and reflective poem on forty years of life's ups and downs. The imagery and emotions expressed are truly touching and relatable. The way you capture the essence of growth, love, and hope is truly inspiring.

    Some suggestions for improvement could be to consider varying sentence structure and length to create a more dynamic rhythm in the poem. Additionally, playing with different poetic devices such as metaphors or symbolism could add even more depth to the already powerful themes explored in the poem.

    Overall, this poem is a wonderful celebration of life's journey and the resilience that comes with it. Keep writing and sharing your heartfelt thoughts with the world!
     
    LikeReply12 days ago

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