The love of my life



Empty spaces in my life...Isolated with your absence...
No sun to shine in my life without you in it....
Multiple echoes of your voice in my head keeps telling me" honey i love u".
Is this you I used to know when we first met?
You were so loveable...You were so caring...was always with me...You were always calling me...
Now i cannot feel the same anymore.
I miss the gentle touch of your hand.
I miss the moments we used to talk for hours on the phone.
My life is solitude once again.

I woke up this morning and thought to myself,
Why I’m always depressed.
Sometimes I’m not finding solutions,
I’m covered by the mist of uncertainty of my life.
It’s really difficult to live a life being alone.
I thought that you will be always there for me.
I guess I have got it all wrong again.
Why does your love suffocate me?
I’m blind that I don't understand you anymore.
Please show me a clear vision.
Can you make my life permanent with you? I need to know.

By Mohamed Fazloon, © 2012, All rights reserved.
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Submitted on August 21, 2014

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Closest metre Iambic hexameter
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Words 193
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 9, 11, 1

Mohamed Fazloon

My Personal profile:I belong to a gem merchant family. I began writing poetry since I was in my fifth grade. I completed my London Ordinary level and London Advanced level in 1998. I also completed my diploma in business management and I finally attained my Bachelors degree B.com in marketing - U.S.A - 2009.My Achievements:1) Won the Editors choice award from International Library of Poetry UK -1997.2) Member of the International society of poets.3) Won many awards at school for best poetry writing - 1995-1998.4) Many poems been published in local newspapers and magazines - 1995-2000. 5) Most valuable poet - poetry.com - 20126) Poet Laureate - Poetry.com - 20127) Legendary Poet - Poetry.com -2012 more…

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