Unloving Love




So staring the stars of the night
Being I'm your's and you're mine
Chin me up to face strife of life
On days we both inlove as lovers
I thought to hold us so tight
With your arms reaching me no doubt
To my senses feel nothing compare

But you said, things unlikely change
Your shadow blurring back a strange
I can't even feel you no more
I'm here my love to you remain
How can I make you stay with me
Of me, you're not happy anymore

So I think of us countless times
Ocean of tears falling in my eyes
Day and night I wish to fight
My love for you rain or shine
If I thought I'll change your mind
But our dreams I'll hide and save inside
May your happiness and stars collide
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme ABXXAXX CCDXXD XXABXEE
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 652
Words 137
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 7, 6, 7

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