heathert.34240
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Pretty and thoughtful poem

So beautifully written. Love the references to her awakening and listening and becoming snowfall again

Beautiful rhymes and appreciation, positive and soothing to read, thank you for sharing

Lovely style, the line your beauty sleeps within me, is delightful

Love the line the walls bow down and worship the creator...as if the winds of god pass through them and they kneel to him

God finds time special for everything especially you my friend who are covered in special particles

Very beautiful collection, moves me greatly

... Rest in peace. there's a lot to learn from grief. It can take the fun out of life... But death is a miracle too in a way a kind of contract or doorway; what we learn in each age can be as miraculous as birth... It's an act of God? Though the dark side of it is hard to focus on, even the light side can draw tears. more »

This is very passionate writing lovely

You don't have to fight it it's just an awakening not a brainwashing. It's all just a renewal of love not hate. A move one step up and on from the crucifix to the paranormal. If you fight it it only makes you ill in spirit and body. It's all inside already you don't need to fight yourself love. It's about vivid (cocreative) dreams kids are having now anyway and having to explain to adults with blockages of mind and body. Try the infinity breath with binary sequencing just once, it gives you a taste of it even if you are blocked. Trust me you'll have an awakening experience even if its limited. more »

My missing link here was when my child walked into a lamppost while distracted by multiple aeroplane lines above in the sunrise.

That's amazingly well written, in depth and interesting.

I read the poem by Robert frost once Your additions are great I couldn't tell when it changed, such a good poem.

That's very moving. Family is a hugh concept. Whether near or far. Happy with it or sad explaining it.

Very thoughtful and beautifully put