talygarza
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The creative metaphor you chose for relationship issues across the poem is challenging.

of course, hope to read poems by you soon.

Composition expressing empathy feelings for people involved in armed conflicts, and the suffer raised when victims are a devastating outcome. Congrats.

The description of the excited environment of friends in a country fair tells the memories which anybody can identify themselves and makes this poem touching.

Poetic reminder to be present and mindful as human beings we are so exposed to noise and unpleasant signs that is hard to keep focused and breathing is a sign of that.

Congrats, the poem enlightens since the point of view of Paris his difficult feelings.

This poem is beautiful captures an entire feeling for trees.

Loneliness is creative just for writing. Well done.

“Peace and rewards” is nice mention in your poem.

Clever and funny poem treating something different as poetic object.

Stunning image and the poem is encouraging and creative.

I see like the thread in your poems is love and romantic issues and relations. Nice.

A poem that reminds dawn

Very smart appreciation since the frog’s view, of course metaphorical.

Very emotional poem