Analysis of SILENCE-CRATER



Facial fissures fill up instantly, they crack like craters down deep. On the mountain opposite stands the prophet's house.- Love poisons with faint sighs: signs of life in tears, painful scars.
Death's keys are tapped by heartache. I am ashamed of the shock of not having been with you, of the doubt that I have been a pessimistic fool, that I have failed in my relationship!

- The last photograph of you did not send, for it may not have been faded, but I still cherished it in my heart with persistent will, diligently! In the shaggy forest of my oak-trees You sought whispering voices, While you healed my hole-ridden heart with self-righteousness and unselfishness!

Nothing yet was seen, Of our all-encompassing connection, of our idyllic existence; Into thy gum-suckled mouth of blood-apple, like a ripe red apple, I did not bite; My cavernous head sought thy harmony-dividing motherly lap, To rest once and for all - Hence all the foolish kneeling!
My childish eyes too have hesitantly beckoned thee, I have carried thy wounded secrets with me to a strange land! - I would have carried your sprained ankle in the forest of my arms, but you proudly waved at me, "It's nothing, it's nothing!" - Between us, the crater of eternal silence commanded humble silence!


Scheme AX A XX
Poetic Form
Metre 10101110011110111010100101111011111101101 11111111011011110111101111100101111101010 0110111111111111011110101110101100000101011111110010111111011110001 101111101010001011001001001111111101011101111110011110001010011110111101010 1101111000101111011010111011111101110001011111101111101100110101010100101010
Characters 1,275
Words 227
Sentences 12
Stanzas 3
Stanza Lengths 2, 1, 2
Lines Amount 5
Letters per line (avg) 200
Words per line (avg) 43
Letters per stanza (avg) 333
Words per stanza (avg) 72
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Written on April 10, 2023

Submitted by oasev on April 09, 2023

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Norbert Tasev

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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