Analysis of Be the YOU



Be yourself be the wonderful YOU,
Life is a pattern you can sew,
A wonderful painting almighty drew..
You don't need admirers in a queue….

Do yourself the things you can do,
Self reliance is your virtue,
Holding onto others might land you,
In a shell, where you lose your value…

Churn and run for an everyday pun,
There’s never a time when you are done,
Knowledge and learning is like baking a bun,
Time it takes, but you will perfect it like none..

Keep walking ahead as others come along,
Stopping for them will pull you away from your dawn,
The path before you might be tiring and long,
That’s the time of test for you to be headstrong..

Victory is a feeling who doesn't want to have,
Reach that height with an elegant suave,
It is a skyscraper, there’s a chance you can fall,
Stay rooted and adamant , this is your last lap.


Scheme AXAA AAAA BBBB CXCC XXXX
Poetic Form Quatrain  (80%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 101101001 11010111 0100100101 111010001 10101111 10101110 101010111 001111110 101111011 110011111 10010111001 11111101111 11001110101 101111101111 01011111001 1011111111 1001010110111 111111001 11010101111 110010011111
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 842
Words 177
Sentences 5
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4
Lines Amount 20
Letters per line (avg) 32
Words per line (avg) 8
Letters per stanza (avg) 128
Words per stanza (avg) 31

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You are the best version of yourself, don’t change but upgrade

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Written on May 10, 2023

Submitted by yogitayamini on May 17, 2023

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