Analysis of Safeguarding



The men
With the pistols
Turned their attention
To the man
Holding a machete.
He smiled a toothy grin
And they all chuckled
At something unsaid.
To anyone else,
It would have been
A terrifying moment,
But they were all
Comfortable with death.
For all of their sin
And addiction,
They knew
They could control
Their behavior.
They knew when
And where
To unleash
Their violence,
And they knew
How to protect
Themselves.


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Poetic Form Tetractys  (64%)
Metre 01 1010 11010 101 10001 110101 01110 11001 1101 1111 010010 1101 100011 11111 0010 11 1101 1010 111 01 101 1100 011 1101 01
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 439
Words 97
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 25
Lines Amount 25
Letters per line (avg) 13
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 335
Words per stanza (avg) 73
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Written on June 28, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on June 28, 2023

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Joe Strickland

I'm just a regular, blue collar, working stiff who took an interest in writing poetry many years ago but until recently I haven't had a desire to share any with anyone or pursue publication. I'm an unpublished fork lift operator by night, and a day drinker by choice. I can be followed on Twitter @JoeStricklandSC more…

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