Analysis of Serotonin Moments



The moment,
Pure and crystalline,
Like a serotonin high—
But what happens
When the haze
Of serotonin clears?
When the dopamine subsides,
And reality creeps in,
Do we return to the void,
The darkness that lingers?

Serotonin moments,
Brief flickers
In the vast expanse
Of existence,
A rush of pleasure
And euphoria,
A glimpse of something more,
Something beyond
The mundane,
The ordinary grasp of life.

We chase these
Fleeting moments,
Like addicts
Seeking fix,
Desperate
To feel alive,
To escape
The clutches
Of monotony,
Of banality.

But when the moment fades,
When the neurotransmitters calm,
We are left with the aftermath,
The emptiness of reality.
The mundane
With its dull hues,
Its tedious routines,
Reclaims its dominion,
And we yearn for that next hit,
That next serotonin surge.

We become slaves
To our own
Neurochemicals,
Trapped
In a cycle
Of chasing highs,
Never truly
Satisfied,
Never truly
Content.

So we hunt,
Relentlessly,
For those
Serotonin moments,
Those ephemeral glimpses
Of something more,
Something
That transcends
The boundaries
Of existence.

But in this endless pursuit,
Do we miss the beauty
Of the in-between?
The stillness,
The quiet,
The moments
Of reprieve?
The ordinary, the mundane,
That also has its own allure,
Its own subdued joy?

Perhaps the answer lies
Not in the chase,
But in the acceptance,
In embracing the highs,
The lows,
And everything in between.
For without the valleys,
The peaks would lose their meaning,
And the serotonin moments,
However fleeting,
Become woven into the fabric
Of our complex human experience.

May we savor the highs
When they come,
But let us not
Overlook
The beauty of
The in-between.
Life is a tapestry
Of serotonin moments
And the spaces
That connect them.


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Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,761
Words 368
Sentences 15
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 10, 10, 10, 10, 10, 10, 10, 12, 10
Lines Amount 92
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 3
Letters per stanza (avg) 154
Words per stanza (avg) 32
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Written on July 11, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on July 11, 2023

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Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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