Analysis of The City's Sad Symphony



I watch the prostitutes walk by,
Their tired eyes hidden
Under layers of makeup.
I can't help but wonder
If they ever dreamed
Of something more
Than this,
If they ever had a chance
To spread their wings.

I pass by the old factory,
Its smokestacks reaching
Towards the sky
Like the bony fingers
Of a forgotten god.
It used to be a place
Of dreams and sweat,
But now
It's just a graveyard
Of broken machines.

I stop by the liquor store,
Where the homeless
Gather like tumbleweeds.
They ask for change,
But the only change I have
Is the kind that jingles
In my pocket,
And even that's not enough
To drown out their pain.

In this city
Of broken mirrors
And shattered glass,
The only thing
You can count on
Is the sound of sirens.
They wail through the night,
A constant reminder
That danger lurks
In every dark corner,
And no one
Is safe.

But still,
I walk these streets,
Like a ghost
Searching
For a familiar face,
Hoping to find
Some semblance
Of meaning
In this chaotic world
Of lost souls
And missed connections.

I am just another
Dropped line,
A forgotten verse
In the city's sad symphony,
But I will keep on walking,
Because sometimes,
Even in the darkest
Of nights,
There's a flicker
Of hope.

And maybe,
Just maybe,
That's enough.


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Poetic Form
Metre 1101011 110110 101011 111110 11101 1101 11 1110101 1111 11101100 1110 0101 101010 100101 111101 1101 11 1101 11001 1110101 1010 1011 1111 1010111 101110 0110 0101101 11111 0110 11010 0101 0101 1111 101110 11101 010010 1101 0100110 011 11 11 1111 101 10 100101 1011 110 110 010101 111 01010 111010 11 00101 00101100 1111110 0101 100010 11 1010 11 010 110 101
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 1,271
Words 292
Sentences 11
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 9, 10, 9, 12, 11, 10, 3
Lines Amount 64
Letters per line (avg) 15
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 138
Words per stanza (avg) 33
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Written on July 13, 2023

Submitted by JoeStrickland on July 13, 2023

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Joe Strickland

Writer from South Carolina. Recently signed first publishing contract and is waiting for release date of first collection of poetry. I've never written a poem while completely sober. You can follow me on Twitter/X @JoeStricklandAU more…

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