Analysis of Uninhabitable Was



Looking into the stack-well of your conscience, you can see exactly the dark stacks of your thirst! Fény writes hopes with you in silver at the store of stars above! You should boldly rely on your instincts on the network of secret intuitions that always whisper the Truth and accept the Honest! Fearless breaks out of the self-circle of the body, and the melancholic soul bell rings forever in the incessantly hammering heart-petal between its cages! The veil of distance falls when the gestures of the faces are closed - when words and promises become false, you can easily fall out of yourself!

The merciless Time throws you into the depths so that you can test it more bravely! And you still don't know who the One-Someone will be waiting for behind you?! – Even the fertile silence is crowded with silence; with its content, it mentally invigorates your latent values, but it also surrounds you, Moon-barking nights wave their Hope-stars - we escape from ourselves when all our paths are stuck! The saving wave of Light reflected in the eyes, if you would let it; girded with tears, they would fall flat!

The world enclosed in skulls is full of itself! Realization breaks through the stateless atrium of silent nests: you should already belong somewhere, but by all means, be Loyal to yourself! Cast in silence, your earthly counterpart stands weightless, and you cannot know your face, which very few have known until now, who can shake it with your uninhabitable past-present memories?!


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Written on February 20, 2024

Submitted by oasev on February 19, 2024

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Norbert Tasev

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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