Analysis of Displeased Doom



Agony-Rock became my daily bread! I am homeless among the screeching traps of trapping savages!

I pack valuable books on my bookshelf ribs every day! spark-igniting Noble ramblings of intellect! Like a wise Sisyphus in the deep sand, my diligence in food rolls through me; my shoulder often breaks! Janus-faced loafers sway at me and talk about responsibilities!

From the rich sunbeams of Bud-radiant eyes, pearls are sprouting!

Muses and Gods hardly shake hands with me anymore! - I bow myself many times, and my beating heart warns of a heart attack; it cannot end well! I would deter the ugly death with the Darling found! Disgruntled Doom on the threshold of life! - My dead-end fate is my sheared Wolf's lair; as a blind mole, I can only cling to possible answers!

I rarely penetrate a world enclosed by a cloud lock: its butterfly-like shadows seem to be a beautiful future; the impatient of None-merciless snaps me every day! Where my existence should pave the way-not that ordeal of deniers! Suicides beg for Sonatas between collisions! My tormented face is painted with a rainbow; it can only smile when it is touched by a cherished ray of sunshine!  How can you survive in this sensational land when money is the God of many?!

A stateless Wanderer will be born of constant, lowly readiness; bloody stars will cast a curse upon my vulnerable soul! Out of the way, as a Fadish shadow, when can you call me with your sweet kisses of loyalty?!


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Words 263
Sentences 19
Stanzas 6
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Lines Amount 6
Letters per line (avg) 192
Words per line (avg) 42
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Written on February 24, 2024

Submitted by oasev on February 23, 2024

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Norbert Tasev

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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