Analysis of HIDE NOTE



Dusk gloom lingers in the extinguished outer spaces! Inner soul - the Sleeper fantasizes about dreams a lot! The cross-section of the objects can still be felt and they are constantly speaking to you if you listen to them! In a torn apart existence, he stops and looks around meditatively with a completely empty gaze, and the "how to continue?" - just guessing at a question, if you can answer! The fear that can be extended to the universal petrifies even in the scattered movements! The space wind blows the persecuted innocents in the face every day, who have still learned to respect Man!

We can be close to ourselves and far from ourselves at the same time; timeless prejudice blazes forth from every hostile gaze! In ourselves, half-hearted, alarmed child whispers to the Past; the pain of the world screams in the Nothing ready to be destroyed! And the moment of Finality is getting closer! Hidden in the rocky lair of homes - a welcoming yet conscious solitude - where you can know and feel: no one can disturb you with malicious criticisms and remarks!

Just as the unutterable thought does not need to deny itself to the one who remains a free thinker! True wisdom is much more like listening defiantly, being outside all circles, and yet knowing about everything: contingent, but in an intermediate state! – The inner soul retreats into silence, the Confucian peace denied, so that it can condemn the calculating compromise! We should learn to recognize the more hidden sounds of the body, feel the sacred truths of our nicknames with our fingertips!

Shocking words often lie! You can only wander aimlessly in the primeval forest of delicate nerves with sincere empathy! Beginning and End is getting denser!


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Words 301
Sentences 18
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 1, 1
Lines Amount 4
Letters per line (avg) 346
Words per line (avg) 74
Letters per stanza (avg) 346
Words per stanza (avg) 74
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Written on March 02, 2024

Submitted by oasev on March 01, 2024

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Norbert Tasev

I was born on November 30, 1983 in Budapest! I studied Hungarian history. I was history teacher. I'm editing ebooks! So far, I have published my volumes on Smachwords and Publishdrive as part of an author's book publishing! more…

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