Analysis of Tomorrow



If I were tomorrow-
I'd be a happy day,
A smiling face on everyone
as people go on there way,
If I were tomorrow-
I'd be better than the day before,
Hopeful hearts with love & joy
and no one keeping score,
If I were tomorrow-
everyday should be like me,
not holding on to negative
& no signs of misery,
If I were tomorrow-
there'd be no one left behind,
If you were tomorrow too-
then it would yours and mine.

By Michael A Watkins.


Scheme AbxbAcxcAdxdAxxx x
Poetic Form
Metre 11001 110101 0101110 1101111 11001 111010101 101111 011101 11001 1011111 11011100 111100 11001 1111101 110011 111101 110010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 449
Words 95
Sentences 2
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 1
Lines Amount 17
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 164
Words per stanza (avg) 43

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feeling good about my future.

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Submitted by michaelw.21046 on March 20, 2024

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