Thoughts

Milo Mikus 2008 (N.C)



I never knew who you were until just now and you're all I can think about your eyes, how the glisten in the sunlight oh so bright but still takes my breath away every time you are in sight.

You laugh brings up the old but not forgotten butterflies. I have oh these feelings feel so new. I wish I knew more of you. oh all the things you do to me make me melt you know exactly what you do but oh if only you knew how much you do to me.

Her eyes follow your every motion causing me so much emotion
I don't know what to do with my feeling for you, if you only knew how much i liked you
Your laugh is like a siren's song from the deep blue sea. how your perfect draws me in to listen to your beautiful melody  .

Your touch is as a fiery kiss from the sun as it’s warmth rushes over me like a silk sheet of my tears,you look at me like i'm one of those girls who fall head over hill for a guy like you and your right i am...over my head in love with you.

So i and only i will know my feelings for you and i wish you would understand how you much you mean to me.

About this poem

its a young girl who has fallen over hills for a boy in her class he doesn't know it yet, she's scared to tell him her true feelings so she puts them on paper and hopes for the best.

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Written on November 18, 2020

Submitted by rmikus5696 on November 18, 2021

Modified by rmikus5696 on November 18, 2021

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Scheme X A XBA B A
Characters 1,062
Words 236
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 1, 1, 3, 1, 1

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Hi, I'm a 13 year old who just loves the idea of falling in love most of my poems will be of love and sometimes if i can find some inspiration ill make one of my life more…

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