The Best Place Ever



Dominque Massey November 3, 2018
The Best Place Ever
Written by : Dominque Massey
Would you like/ to be in a place
Where you can be free/ with a smile on your face A place where things/ are splendid and sweet Fruit on every tree/ that you can eat
You won’t have/ to be afraid anymore
Peace will be there /There’s more in store
You won’t need money /To buy the things you need Everything will be available /All you have to do is feed
Every one will lend a hand /As we turn this world around The conditions will be peaceful /No more going underground There we will be perfect/ No more sickness no more death We will swim in the bayou /Holding our breath
Could you picture yourself there/ Playing with a bear Riding its back/ Brushing its hair
Every single morning/ you wake up and see
All the things created/ just for you and me
I can imagine/ sitting next to my dad
Telling him all the things he missed /so he wouldn’t be sad Everyone will be happy /to have their loved ones back There would be tears of joy/ no one will be sad
Every morning /we will wake up
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 To a song thanking/ Jehovah all day long
He is the one/ that brought everyone back to life
He alone deserves the praise /we won’t give him any strife How long will we/ be able to live on this earth
We will live forever /no one will get hurt
Wickedness will be done away with /we will celebrate This wonderful beautiful earth/ that we will dedicate
We will be able to be free/ and not worry about the devil He will be destroyed /on so many levels
Paradise will occur/ when the nations yell “Peace” We’ll be happy to be persecuted /by these ugly beasts This wonderful place /will cover the whole earth
We will be able to help Jehovah /clean up the dirt
We will be young again/ smiling from ear to ear Everything will be perfect/ nobody has to fear
We will thank Jesus/ for his sacrifice
He had made a promise/ I will see you in paradise
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About this poem

Inspired by my cousins

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Written on November 03, 2018

Submitted by dominque_m on February 02, 2022

Modified on March 23, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AABXXCCXXXBBDDXE XXFGXXFGXHHE
Characters 1,915
Words 367
Stanzas 2
Stanza Lengths 16, 12

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