The demise of my love
Hath devoice me such amuse
Eyes see red sea
Whisper
Red is the color of my heart
Ambiance
The beat of my heart
Strength less dove lombs decline
I fear her voice
I mourn her touch
Scorn her stare
And waste over fantasy of her kiss
For desire doth satiety, i am amiss
Give me one, even when cold
A cold day with her the sun shivers
Hold her hand in sweaty palm
And tremble in my passion
Over my arm with lust sate appetite.
Called it fever,snell tight hand round her neck
And again chide, saw the lust in my trembling lips
But now devoured, lost in the red of her eyes
Touch her cheek, fed me irritated shake
Her eyes gaze in me and hath doze me daze
But she churlish and saith for me resentment she hoards.
About this poem
This poem expresses the story of a sad lovestory between a humble boy who loves a very rude and mean girl.
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Written on October 26, 2022
Submitted by michaelm.09460 on October 26, 2022
Modified on March 05, 2023
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Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 711 |
Words | 147 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 12, 5, 6 |
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