The love of my life



            The love of my life

She is as sweet as honey
And I love her more than money
She drives me crazy
Even when the wind is not blazing

When I see her pritty face
It seems like heaven descents down
Even to those that are sin bound
She sings like an aka 47
That was created in 1997
She is a human in figure
But an angel above mixture

She smiles beautifully
To get her is not that easy
Beautifully bloomed before flowers
Because she can see during thunder showers

She stole my heart
When I stepped into the school yard
The same time she talks
She runs through my thoughts
She is my light skin super hero
If loving her was an assessment I won't get a zero

Author: Hans Mwiiyale

About this poem

I wrote this poem in enlightenment of a special girl in my life whom I really love and adore very much. It is a poem that is not specifically writing about her personality or traits but it concentrates more on how I think of her figuratively. I tried to implant figures of speach such as onomatopoeia and others. It might contain some words that can be mis interpreted at times thus this poem will be best felt if read out loud. I have also used a technique where I have ordered my stanzas in the form of 4 lines in the first stanza and six lines in the second and the pattern continues.  

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Written on October 03, 2022

Submitted by hansmwiiyale on October 03, 2022

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme X AAAX XXXXXBB AACC XXXXDD X
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 687
Words 138
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 1, 4, 7, 4, 6, 1

Hans Mwiiyale

I am a low-key person. I love making jokes and making people laugh. Whenever I am alone I love writing either articles, peoms or songs. Most importantly I like writing rhymes as I just find it soothing. I also do like football. more…

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