together as one

martis 2000 (il)



the way i felt when i first touched you was
different

you're hand holding mine
 connected as one

I fear if you leave ill lose half of myself

      -if I lose my spark
                 my soul will follow

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my poem is about how I felt when I held hands with someone who was important to me that I no longer have in my life

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Written on April 22, 2023

Submitted by killuagohl on April 22, 2023

Modified by killuagohl on April 22, 2023

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Quick analysis:

Scheme XX XX X XX
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 207
Words 41
Stanzas 4
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 1, 2

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