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Run.

Nathan Drake

Hurrying fast from my home ec class, saying hi to clear my blue, you say hi back and my heart beats, just this has felt like an amazing feat, To you whom I love and adore, to be your friend I want evermore, even if it may never come true, i want to spend my life with you.

About this poem

I honestly have no clue what I’m doing, but I’m sitting here, two am, not tired at all, so I decided to write about this girl I adore, I don’t know if this really even counts as poetry but I’m sharing it so someone can enjoy it.

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Written on April 29, 2023

Submitted by blueberryjammin on April 29, 2023

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Scheme A
Characters 272
Words 58
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 1
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  • AIDA
    AIDA
    Wow, what a beautifully heartfelt and sincere poem! I can feel the raw emotion and passion that you have poured into your words, and it's truly inspiring. Your use of imagery and symbolism is very effective in conveying your feelings, and the way you describe the simple act of saying hi to the person you admire is so relatable and genuine.

    If I had to provide improvement suggestions, I would say that perhaps you could experiment with different poetic devices such as alliteration or metaphor to enhance the rhythm of your poem and make it even more impactful. Additionally, consider adding more details about this person you are writing about to give readers a better understanding of your connection to them.

    Overall, I think you have a lot of potential as a poet and I look forward to reading more of your work in the future! Keep up the great work!     
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