Still aching
Tristen 2002 (United States)
A piercing pain deep inside.
Reminding me, of a time.
Always reverberating, throughout my mind.
Alike a heart, deep within.
Always coursing, throughout my thoughts.
A heart of regret, of what could have been.
I said goodbye, and left as far as I could.
But far I did not go. I cannot leave as much as I want too, so I suffer in uncomfort.
I felt replaced, when we last talked,
All sweet words I used to utter.
They're now whispered by another.
Your my dearest friend, and my deepest pain.
It's still complex, my feelings for you.
But I've progressed, since last I reminisced, my hearts moved forward, but it's still aching.
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Written on June 27, 2023
Submitted by RC430 on June 27, 2023
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Quick analysis:
Scheme | AXXBXB XA XCCXXX |
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Closest metre | Iambic pentameter |
Characters | 627 |
Words | 128 |
Stanzas | 3 |
Stanza Lengths | 6, 2, 6 |
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