Triangles Eternal

Stuart McFarlane 1954 (United Kingdom)



Triangles Eternal

The night is iron ore, the sky as black as flint  
and stars,like sparks of silver innocently glint;
time, itself, seems melted down, its vital essence tamed
by these strange forms; so silently, so perfectly framed
against an opal moon where, like lava flowing,
the desert sands ripple, orange embers glowing.

Triangles eternal- shapes cut out of the night,
each one a prism absorbing a beam of light
that inculcates unseen sinews of stone,
down a deep shaft that threads the inner cone
until, slowly, revealing a once secret room,
an ancient burial chamber; a pharoah's tomb.

Perhaps, like Tutankhamun, his face a mask of solid gold.
To imagine; conceive of? Yet to actually behold?
Bold amulets and jewels, all red, blue and green,
in a chaos of colour that glitters and gleams;
or his chariots, his magnificent treasure;
a moment so precious it is beyond measure.

Now the light's dimmer, gradually leaks away,
throwing a dark shroud over the place he still lay.
The beam retreats along the shaft; to now return
to a dark sky, where a few stars still faintly burn.

Soon the sands grow brighter, the sky a sapphire blue
and, as if all the myths were suddenly come true,
a golden sun rises-a new day dawns-
and the pyramids now are burnished bronze.

About this poem

Written after seeing the pyramids at Giza.

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Written on July 18, 2022

Submitted by smcfar on April 09, 2024

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Scheme AABBCC DDEEFF GGXXHH IIJJ KKXX
Closest metre Iambic hexameter
Characters 1,274
Words 245
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 6, 6, 6, 4, 4

Stuart McFarlane

Stuart McFarlane has spent many years, both abroad and in the UK, teaching English. In the Uk this mainly involved teaching Esol to refugees and asylum seekers. He is now semi-retired and so can devote more time to writing poetry. He has had a few poems published in local magazines and in online publications such as 'Borderless Journal', based in Malaysia and 'Culture Matters', based in the UK. more…

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