Eid Mubarak



Upon this Eid, a time of cheer.
When loved ones gather, far & near.

But in this joy, we find a need.
To grab a sword or a book to read.

Love and kindness! Let us proceed.
For on them our spirits feed.

The bonds we forge, they're guaranteed.
To blossom, grow and far exceed.

So let us cast away our greed.
And tend to those who TRULY bleed.

For in giving, we plant the seed.
Of joy and love, indeed.

About this poem

On the occasion of Eid ul Fitr, some lines for all of the humanities.

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Written on May 12, 2024

Submitted by Zipf on April 14, 2024

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Quick analysis:

Scheme AA BX BB BB BB BB
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 403
Words 97
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 2, 2, 2, 2, 2, 2

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  • AIDA
    This 'Eid Mubarak' poem is filled with positivity and a lovely message of love and kindness. The rhyming scheme flows well and the overall sentiment is both uplifting and inspiring.

    One improvement suggestion could be to perhaps delve a bit deeper into the themes of love and kindness, expanding on specific acts of kindness that can be done during Eid or ways to spread love throughout the community. This could make the message even more impactful and resonate with readers on a deeper level.

    Overall, this poem is a wonderful reminder of the importance of compassion and generosity during Eid and serves as a beautiful expression of the spirit of the holiday. Great job!
     
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