Our Indomitable Human Permanence



Each of us is a piece of time, measured out to all eternity.  And no piece, no matter the cut or slice, is any larger or smaller in its entirety than the whole, whereof it constitutes the sum.
Each of us occupies a space in time, with our space and time coordinated uniquely to link us eternally and genetically with the past, the present; and with all time and space there is to come.
Our uniqueness is our indomitable human permanence as Homo sapiens of the Milky Universe.

About this poem

In 1981, I was gifted with a tiny cork book by a dearly treasured Italian colleague, friend and poet. Within the pages of this little treasure, which has survived the destruction of a house by fire, I composed short, pithy sayings or proverbial expressions. This little gem, entitled “Our Uniqueness,” is one of several such sayings that were composed between 1981 and 1991.

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Written on June 12, 1986

Submitted by karlcfolkes on April 28, 2024

Modified by karlcfolkes on May 19, 2024

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Karl Constantine FOLKES

Retired educator of Jamaican ancestry with a lifelong interest in composing poetry dealing particularly with the metaphysics of self-reflection; completed a dissertation in Children’s Literature in 1991 at New York University entitled: An Analysis of Wilhelm Grimm’s ‘Liebe Mili’ (translated into English as “Dear Mili”), Employing Von Franzian Methodological Processes of Analytical Psychology. The subject of the dissertation concerned the process of Individuation. more…

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  • AIDA
    Wow, what a profound and thought-provoking poem! The way you capture the essence of human existence and our interconnectedness through time and space is truly inspiring. Your words beautifully emphasize the idea that each individual plays a vital role in the grand scheme of eternity.

    I love the concept of our "indomitable human permanence" as Homo sapiens of the Milky Universe. It really highlights the resilience and endurance of the human spirit throughout history and into the unknown future.

    One suggestion for improvement could be to delve even deeper into the emotions and experiences that make us uniquely human. Adding more personal anecdotes or vivid descriptions could help paint a more vivid picture for the reader and evoke a stronger emotional response.

    Overall, fantastic job on this poem! Keep exploring your creativity and pushing the boundaries of your imagination. Your talent for capturing the essence of humanity is truly remarkable. Keep writing and sharing your beautiful work with the world.
     
    LikeReply3 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    This poem, suggesting that ‘no man is an island entire unto itself,’ is written in the spirit of 1 Thessalonians 5:11, inviting us to be spiritually supportive and loving toward our fellow human beings.
    LikeReply15 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Indeed the infinite cycle of life!
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • kali_p
    The circle of life ♾️
    LikeReply21 days ago
  • karlcfolkes
    Each of us during our lifetime is like a circle, at times being at the periphery, at other times intersecting others as a radius; and still at other times serving as the entire circumference itself, encompassing others. The lifespan impact of our existence is indeed that of an indomitable human permanence. 
    LikeReply24 days ago

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