Sweet Sin: A Breathless Journey



You move past me
...breathe in
...breathe out
Sweet sin in a breeze
....breathe in
....breathe out
My mind races through possibilities
....breathe in
....breathe out
Soft skin and gentle caresses (such sweet sin)
....breathe in
....breathe out
We lock eyes and I am swept up in the world of you...shhhhh
Don't talk, just be still and ever present
in a moment
in my haze
in my daze
Of you and me and tangled sheets (such sweet sin)
....breathe in
....breathe out
Now say good morning

About this poem

That deep seeded desire to throw caution to the wind and give in to those dark desires

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Written on April 19, 2024

Submitted by DNCrim77 on April 19, 2024

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Scheme aBCdBCdBCbBCeffggbBCh
Closest metre Iambic dimeter
Characters 487
Words 91
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 21

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