O You Who Complete Me

Afreen Iqbal 2008 (Srinagar , Kashmir)



I HAVE A FEELING OF YOUR NEED
I HAVE A FEELING YOU BE NEAR
I HAVE A DEEP DESIRE OF YOU BEING HERE
I WISH THAT YOU GET MY CARE.
I DON'T WANT TO FEEL DEPRIVED
DON'T WANT MY HEART FLOOD WITH TEARS.
JUST PAY AT ME SOME ATTENTION.


HAVING YOU NEAR IS A DREAM COME TRUE,
BE WITH ME I'LL BE WITH YOU


I WISH THIS CRYING IN MY PRAYERS,
O YOU WHO COMPLETE ME,
DON'T YOU EVER DISAPPEAR.


AND ITS NOT A FRESH FEELING,
ITS NOT A NEW LOVE,
IT STARTED JUST FROM THE VERY BEGINNING,
WHEN I CAME TO KNOW WHAT YOU MEAN TO ME.

KEEP LOVING ME I’LL KEEP LOVING YOU
O YOU WHO COMPLETE ME ,
DON’T YOU EVER DISAPPEAR.

YES ITS THE TALK OF MY CHILDHOOD,
WHEN I DIDN'T EVEN KNOW
WHAT THIS FEELING IS CALLED,
BUT! YES, THEIR LIVED A BELIEF
AS FEELING YOU NEAR REALLY FELT GOOD.


BE WITH ME, ILL BE WITH YOU
O YOU WHO COMPLETE ME,
LOVE ME OR NOT BUT
I'LL ALWAYS KEEP LOVING YOU
                                
                                                            ~AFREEN IQBAL

About this poem

This poem expresses the feeling of a girl who is having this feeling of getting parted from her mother whom she loves the most and does not want that she should live a single minute without her !

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Written on October 24, 2022

Submitted by afreeniqbal002 on April 24, 2024

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Scheme xaxxxbx cc bDa exed cDa fxxxf cDxc
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 967
Words 207
Stanzas 7
Stanza Lengths 7, 2, 3, 4, 3, 5, 4

Afreen Iqbal

A 16 year old girl, who is passionate about observing her feelings and versing them on the paper . She feels the need of poetry in her dramatic life . Studies in higher secondary school . Lives in India. more…

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