EMPTY PROMISES



As I contemplate the meaning of my Life
Tears fall from my bloodshot eyes
The Pain and Anger I mostly feel
Are the Empty Promises from the sky.

I’m told to turn, take up my cross,
And follow the One True God.
I, Chief of all the Sinners, am simply not worthy.
I am just not enough As worn on the faces of ones I Love

In knowing that I have failed them,
As a Husband, a Father, nor a Brother Be.
Plagued by the stench of unrepented Sin.
“For the wages of Sin is Death.”1

Promises, bring with them,
the sin of Arrogance, Jealousy, Fear, and Pride.
Void of all what’s Good
Humility, Tolerance, Patience, and Trust

As the dawn of a new day welcomes the Horizon Red,
I pray to the Son, Repenting my Awful Sins.
For Jesus is Lord who sends Unconditional Love
Transforming the Empty Promises from the Sky.

About this poem

To be the best person you can be is to identify your sins, either against yourself or another and truly repent. The Son will help you overcome every obstacle if you lay down your burdens at his feet and believe. Repentance is simply the act of identifying the deed and acknowledge that it is a sin and how to do better in the future and sincerely try not to repeat the same actions.

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Written on April 10, 2024

Submitted by jamesrpendleton_1 on April 10, 2024

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Scheme XXXA XXBC DBXX DXXX XXCA
Closest metre Iambic pentameter
Characters 814
Words 170
Stanzas 5
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4

James Robert Pendleton

I have been writing poetry for over 35 years. I find it therapeutic to write a dedicated poem versus in a journal or diary. With the poem I can categorize my thoughts, feelings (hurts and what nots). By the end of the poem I will have worked through the issue at that time. more…

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