The Long-Ago God



I remember when you were god
when you were Samson and Solomon
that whenever I looked at your face
you were a pyramid,
abutting the sky and luminescent like Polaris
with showers of light coloring your shadow;
It was then
that the mere hint of your voice
ended my day-long aches
and it was then
that a gingerly touch from your hands
turned erstwhile gloom into blue sky
I remember when you were god
you were the breath of the Nile
flowing, flapping your wings
and generating perfection
It was then
that I cherished the day
when, I too, could approximate you
I remember when you were god
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Submitted on May 01, 2011

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Scheme AbcdefGhigjkAlmbGnoA
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 565
Words 108
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 20

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