Analysis of Between



I'm stumbling on words
when i see your name light up
i go numb
as you look at me or when you talk
the whole world gets quiet around me.
my heart beats so fast and
when it slows
my brain loses control.
when i utter words they come out
unrecognizable
it's because I'm in love.
as you speak to me about
the future, the things we both want to see
you and i are forever one
no matter how big the sea.
the love i have for you
will never drown.
no matter how big
a tsunami gets
I'm willing to survive it with one, two, even
three times the breath.
i will fight to get to you.
and to say yes to you!


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJKIELEMNOPQRMM
Poetic Form
Metre 110011 1111111 111 111111111 011110011 111110 111 111001 11101111 00100 101101 1111101 0100111111 10110101 1101101 011111 1101 11011 00101 110101111110 1101 1111111 011111
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 574
Words 125
Sentences 8
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 23
Lines Amount 23
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 452
Words per stanza (avg) 125
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Submitted by PrincesaMystic on May 15, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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