Analysis of Horror & Vampire Haiku Set #005



ALMOST MEN HUNTING (18/05/2021)
Almost men hunting
For living human women,
To claim as their own.

ALMOST-PEOPLE SUCK (18/05/2021)
Almost people suck
Living essence from humans,
Leaving nothing good.

ALMOST-PEOPLE TRAVEL (18/05/2021)
Almost-people travel
Near dark lonely highways,
Hidden from traffic.

APPROACHING FAST (17/05/2021)
Alien fiends crossing
The endless vacuum of space,
Approaching Earth fast.

BAT-WINGED MONSTERS SCREECH (17/05/2021)
Bat-winged monsters screech
Their radar detects movement,
Soon the fiends will feed.

BETWEEN GALAXIES (17/05/2021)
The vacuum of space
Between diff'rent galaxies,
Evil aliens cross.

BLASTED LANDSCAPES (18/05/2021)
Blasted landscapes
Grey and bleak like desert plains,
No life remaining now.

CLOVEN-HOOFED FIEND (17/05/2021)
A cloven-hoofed fiend
Enters a clearing where
Foolish people blaspheme.

THE DARK INHERITANCE
Dark inheritance:
Blood tainted by ancestors,
Makes you walk the night.

DARKNESS IS KIND
Darkness is kind
To the creatures of the night,
Who fear the bright sunlight.

DARK SHADOWS CALLING
Dark shadows beckon:
Vampires in the night; you can’t
Resist their calling.

FABLED BEASTS (17/05/2021)
Awful fabled beasts live
Upon a frozen mountain peak,
Climbers soon to die.

HOWLING WINDS OF DEATH (17/05/2021)
Tormented by shrieks
Howling winds that bring death,
Sweeping all life away.

ICY WATERWAYS (17/05/2021)
Icy waterways
Leading to a frozen Hell,
Human life now gone.

JAGGED OUTCROPS (17/05/2021)
Jagged outcrops house
Unimaginable horrors
Things straight from Hell.

NIGHT BLACK CREATURES (17/05/2021)
Night black creatures lurk
Just beyond your range of sight,
Closing for the kill.

NIGHT BLACK SHADOWS (17/05/2021)
Night black shadows leap
Out toward the unprepared,
Tear them limb from limb.

NIGHT'S SATINY SHADES (17/05/2021)
Night's satiny shades
Blind you to the dangers,
Lurking just out of sight.

PISCINE MONSTERS (17/05/2021)
Piscine monsters surface
Slaughtering lost swimmers,
Then dive back below.

PITCH BLACK FIGURES (17/05/2021)
Pitch black figures creep
Out of the ebony wastes,
Needing soon to feed.

SOMETHING OUT OF HELL (17/05/2021)
Something out of Hell
Horned and exhaling fire
Not remotely human.

SYMPHONY OF DESTRUCTION (17/05/2021)
Discordant jangling
Symphony of destruction,
Slowly warming up.

UNDEAD TEMPTRESSES (16/05/2021)
Night veils covering
Lethal undead temptresses
Stalking living men.

VILE IMAGES (17/05/2021)
Eerie shadows fall
Across unsuspecting faces,
Showing vile images.

DARK WINGS OVERHEAD
Dark wings overhead
Block out the sun and cast,
Fearful shadows below.

DAWN OF THE VAMPIRE
When humans bed down
Others wake in deep crypts,
And hunt for hot, fresh blood.

DEATH STREET
Pale skinned monsters lurk
In the basement of a house,
In a nameless street.

DEEP IN SUNKEN CRYPTS (II)(04/11/2010)
Deep in sunken crypts
Ancient creatures stirring,
Hoping soon to feast.

DELIGHT
Starving mouths feeding
From brutally severed throats,
Gurgling from delight.

DEMON BABIES
Demon babies feed
From shattered arteries,
Supping crimson milk.

THE DEMON CHILDREN (I)
Young children sleep in
Their coffins by day, but then
Lust for blood by night.

DEMONS FEASTING
Dreaming of terrors
You awake to find demons,
Feasting upon you.

DEMONS IN BURIAL GROUNDS
Demons in burial grounds,
Creep up on the mourners,
Eager for a feed.

DEMONS REACHING
Dark shadows lengthen
As demons in the gloom,
Reach out for the living.

THE DEVIL’S INHERITANCE
Lurking in shadows,
Questing after blood:
The Devil’s inheritance.

DREAMING OF VAMPIRES
Dreaming of vampires
Night after night, year after year
Without respite.

DRIVING THE POINT HOME
A dour figure stands
Near an open casket, holding
A hawthorn stake.

DUNGEON OF DEATH
A dungeon of death
Houses sallow-faced corpses,
Which rise again at dusk.

THE EMERGENCE
Graveyard workers scream
As coffins break open,
The living dead emerge.

THE ENERGY VAMPIRES
Even the ones you love
Sap your strength and health,
Just like vampires of old.

EVIL AFTER MIDNIGHT
Loathsome creatures hunt
Throughout the streets and alleys,
Seeking human prey.

EVIL APPROACHES
Footsteps in the hall
Wingbeats in the darkness,
Danger drawing nearer.

EVIL BAT-WINGED FIENDS
Evil bat-winged fiends
Lurking in old graveyards,
Leap out at the living.

THE METAMORPHOSIS
Humans change to bats
Then swoop in through your window,
Landing on your neck.

THE MIDNIGHT CALLER
Blood seeps from wounds
Jugulars ripped asunder,
By a midnight caller.

MONSTERS FEAST
Blood drips from gashes
Torn by feasting monsters,
Upon tender young throats.

NECTAR
Fangs glisten from lust
Longing to taste the nectar,
Of tender, young throats.

NIGHT FLYERS
Death stalks ’cross the land
Evil flying on batwings;
Sharp fangs sinking deep.

NIGHT HORRORS (III)
Fiends with large, black wings
And gloving dark red eyes,
Who thirst for human blood.

NIGHT WALKERS
Evil creatures walk
Through the dark night streets,
Of a village lost to fear.

NON-REFLECTIVE MIRRORS
Non-reflective mirrors
Give a vital warning:
Vampires in the room.

ON THE BRINK OF TERROR
Terror welling up
Images of caped strangers,
Lurking near your room.

PALE, GRISLY CADAVERS
Grisly cadavers
Pale from lack of blood,
After vampires have feasted.

PALE-SKINNED MONSTERS
Pale skinned monsters lurk
In shadows, waiting nearby
Reaching out for prey.

THE END
© Copyright 2021, Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


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Poetic Form
Metre 1110 1110 1101010 11111 1101 1101 1010110 10101 11010 11010 11101 10110 0101 100110 0101011 01011 11101 11101 110110 10111 01100 01011 0111100 101001 101 101 1011101 110101 111 0111 100101 10101 010100 10100 110110 11101 1011 1011 1010101 11011 1110 1110 1000111 01110 101 101011 01010101 10111 10111 1011 101111 101101 1010 1010 1010101 10111 11 111 0100010 1111 1110 11101 1011111 10101 111 1111 101001 11111 111 111 111010 101111 110 11010 100110 11101 1110 11101 1101001 10111 10111 10111 10110 101010 1001010 0101 1001010 10101 11 11100 1011 10101 1100 1011 0101010 101100 11101 11101 110101 10101 11010 11011 101011 011111 11 11101 0010101 00101 101011 10101 101010 10111 01 10110 1100101 100101 1010 10101 110100 1101 010101 11010 1101111 11111 1010 10110 1011110 10011 1001001 1001001 111010 10101 1010 1110 110001 111010 0100100 1001 1101 0100100 10110 10110 11011101 0110 10011 010101 11101010 011 1011 01011 101110 110111 0010 1101 110110 010101 010010 100111 11101 111011 10101 10101 0101010 10101 10010 1001 10010 101010 10111 10111 10011 111010 00100 10111 1101110 10111 0110 1111 11010 10110 101 11110 111010 011011 10 11011 1011010 11011 110 11101 101011 11101 1101 11111 01111 111101 110 10101 10111 1010111 101010 101010 101010 10001 101110 10101 1001110 10111 110010 10010 11111 1010110 1110 11101 011011 10111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 5,172
Words 806
Sentences 55
Stanzas 55
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 219
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 78
Words per stanza (avg) 15
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Modified by PHIL_ROBERTS on May 19, 2021

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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