Analysis of The dying time

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



In '16 the Dying Time begins
And even the strong succumb,
The fragile and elderly have little chance
Of surviving till Dying Time is done.

In '17 the Dying Time takes off
The elderly start to die,
And only the strongest and healthiest
Have any real chance to survive.

In '18 the Dying Time will peak
And slowly will come to an end,
So the fragile and elderly are finally safe
Till the Dying Time starts up again.

For three years every decade
The Dying Time hacks like a scythe,
And all the world over the frail
Begin first to sick then die.

The Dying Time does not discriminate
It kills everybody it can,
It stalks around the wide world
Like a plaque that is sweeping the land.

So rug up and try to stay warm
Stay healthy and out of the cold,
When the Dying Time swathes ‘cross the nation
It takes all ages, not merely the old.

The Dying Time can be predicted
It comes round the same time each decade,
But it’s not something you can prepare for
It’s not something you can evade.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XXXA XBXX XCXX DXXB XXXX XEAE XDXD CXX
Poetic Form
Metre 0010101 0100101 01001001101 1010110111 0010111 0100111 0100100100 11011101 0010111 01011111 1010010011001 101011101 11110001 01011101 01011001 0111111 010111010 1110011 1101011 101111001 11101111 11001101 1010111010 1111011001 010111010 111011101 1111011011 11101101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,026
Words 197
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 27
Words per line (avg) 6
Letters per stanza (avg) 104
Words per stanza (avg) 25
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