Analysis of Unnoticed words whisper in empty ears?

Daniel Morin 1975 (Manchester)



Unknown  unnoticed  words to confine my world my mind in a jumbled bind
                      ×with and without ryme
Does it .matter empty eyes do they yet to shatter or are they not glass?words to whisper  of a past but no that just won't  last. My mind will not resign so the words will continue  .till i decide or my  lood to spill for this glass  has not yet been  to fill
Words wisper of hopelessness  
Words whisper of hope
Words  whisper  of joy
Words  whisper  of anger  
Words whisper  of rage
words whisper   but who cares to listen  
Empty eyes do they not glisten and  does you or i really care to  change  by the whispers of words?


Scheme ABCDEFGHIJ
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 010101101111100101 10011 111010111111011111110101111111111101101101011111111111111111 111100 11011 11011 110110 11011 110111110 101111100111110111101011
Closest metre Iambic heptameter
Characters 641
Words 118
Sentences 5
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 10
Lines Amount 10
Letters per line (avg) 48
Words per line (avg) 14
Letters per stanza (avg) 475
Words per stanza (avg) 135
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Submitted by Dordrum on May 23, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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