Analysis of Look forward, don't look back.



Look forward, don't look back.
What my mind says, when i can't get back.
Painful to remember to many tears to see through
It's like sailing through a storm and praying for clear blue.

Everyday's a war
A final count down
I try to win but i lose to the voice in my mind
Who's joy is t0 hurt me and make me cry.
I'm unraveling and time is running out.
I feel like my life is being snuffed out.

To the world I am small
nonexsisted  to most
if feels like i walk around i must be a ghost
My outer shell is transparent as you can tell.
Earth is no heaven, it must be my hell.

Look forward, don't look back.
i fear they are watching me
I'm under attack.
sadness leads the way to another dark day

I wish the sun could stay
Shine on my face
Light my way
Take the night and give my day

Look Forward, don't look back.


Scheme Aabb xxxxcc xddee Axaf fxff A
Poetic Form
Metre 110111 111111111 1010101101111 1110101010111 101 01011 1111111101011 1111110111 10100011101 1111111011 101111 111 111110111101 110110101111 1111011111 110111 1111101 11001 10101101011 110111 1111 111 1010111 110111
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 782
Words 165
Sentences 11
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 4, 6, 5, 4, 4, 1
Lines Amount 24
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 7
Letters per stanza (avg) 103
Words per stanza (avg) 28
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Nicole Iamiceli Navas

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