Analysis of NIGHT FEEDERS

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



Night feeders searching
For unwary travellers,
Feeding time is nigh.

Small and feathered
Like prehistoric reptiles,
Night Feeders eat anything.

Like tiny dinosaurs
Barely a metre high,
Night Feeders hunting.

Night Feeders ready
To run down human beings,
The favourite food.

Lonely people walk
Outside under dead of night,
As Night Feeders near.

Stalking through shadows
The Night Feeders smell humans,
Move in for the kill.

Shrieking like the sound
That death itself might make,
When eating human food.

Night Feeders devour
Every single morsel,
Of their living food.

Wild coyotes shrink
From the sight of feeders,
Retreating rapidly.

Bears run in terror
As Night Feeders approach,
Everything fears them.

Cats and dogs vanish
When Night Feeders are shrieking,
Like the sound of death.

Nothing dares to move
Or show itself outside with,
Night Feeders outside.

No-one dares to breathe
In case the Feeders overhear
Their exhalations.

Now it's a ghost town
No creature left their alive.
So Night Feeders move on.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABC XXA XCA DXE XXX XXX XXE FXE XBD FXX XAX XXX XXB XXX XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (29%)
Metre 11010 1010100 10111 1010 101010 110110 11010 100101 11010 11010 1111010 011 10101 1110111 11101 1011 0110110 10101 10101 110111 110101 110010 1001010 11101 10101 101110 010100 11010 111001 1011 10110 1110110 10111 10111 1101111 11011 11111 01010101 11 11011 1101101 111011 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,047
Words 172
Sentences 16
Stanzas 15
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 45
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 11
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