Analysis of THE SHADOW OF DEATH (II)

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



The shadow of death
Is drifting by like a cloud,
Of toxic gases.

Those who see it run
Those who don't fall lifeless,
Like a discarded doll.

Cats and dogs race off
Birds fall from the skies,
Nothing living is immune.

Lovers holding hands
On a midnight stroll collapse,
Killed as the cloud nears.

Revellers returning
From a late-night party die,
Metres from their home.

Street people dying
By the dozen, as the Shadow
Of death goes past.

A wandering drunk
Walks into the shadow and,
Is found dead at dawn.

The Shadow of Death
Passed through this town, taking
Many lives out with it.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme Axx xxx xxx xxx bxx bxx xxx Abx xxx
Poetic Form
Metre 0111 1101101 11010 11111 111110 100101 10111 11101 1010101 10101 101101 11011 100010 1011101 10111 11010 1010101 1111 01001 101010 11111 0111 111110 101111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 626
Words 115
Sentences 9
Stanzas 9
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 27
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 57
Words per stanza (avg) 13
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Modified on March 05, 2023

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