Analysis of IN THE VERDANT FOREST



Birds fly overhead
Looking for a place to land,
Without being killed.

Down below them is
A verdant wonderland,
Beautiful and deadly.

Hoping to get past
The evil greenery,
The tired birds fly onwards.

Eventually too tired
Birds are forced to land,
Hoping not to die.

But even as they land
Quick vines soar out,
Seizing the squawking creatures..

Dragging them in
The vines devour the birds,
Spitting out bones and feathers.

Sated, the vines wait
Upon carnivorous trees,
Hungry for a kill.

When animals or people
Walk through the forest,
Branches reach for them

Verdant killers thrive
On the meat of humans,
Or birds or animals.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAX XAB XBC XAX AXD XCD XXX XXX XXX XXX
Poetic Form Etheree  (30%)
Tetractys  (27%)
Metre 11101 1010111 01101 10111 01010 100010 10111 010100 0101110 01000110 11111 10111 110111 1111 1001010 1010 0101001 1011010 10011 0101001 10101 1100110 11010 10111 10101 101110 111100 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 669
Words 117
Sentences 9
Stanzas 10
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 30
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 56
Words per stanza (avg) 12

About this poem

The third poem, in what will now be my Verdant World Quadrilogy.

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Written on June 06, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 06, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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