Analysis of HIDDEN IN THE LIGHT



Hidden in the light
Monsters lurk unseen,
Preying upon the living
Supping upon their souls;
Feasting on their life force
Leaving them empty shells,
Zombie-like undead things
Shambling, not quite whole.

Hidden from the living
Monsters stalk us all,
Hiding in plain sight
Unseen by the light of day;
Only seen in darkness
They hunt humanity,
Fearful of the darkness
But safe in the sun's rays.

Hidden in plain sight
The dead devour our souls,
Leaving us half-people
Depleted on the inside;
Yet seeming still alive
The living rarely notice,
The emptiness within
Those just newly died.

Hidden in plain view
Black and carapaced,
Like man-sized insects
Ingesting our life essence;
Monster haunt the daytime
Picking out their prey,
Readying to pounce upon
Victims with no defence.

Screams of terror ring out
From those whose life they sup,
Yet no-one living hears them
Only those who feed;
More and more are emptied
Of all their living essence,
No longer human beings
Just food to quench their need.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme AXBCXXDX BXAEFXFX ACXGXFXG XAXHXEXX XXXIIHDI XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 10001 10101 1001010 10111 101111 101101 10111 1111 101010 10111 10011 0110111 101010 110100 101010 110011 10011 01010101 101110 0101001 110101 0101010 010001 11101 10011 101 1111 01010110 10101 10111 1001101 101101 111011 111111 1111011 10111 101110 1111010 1101010 111111 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 1,023
Words 177
Sentences 6
Stanzas 6
Stanza Lengths 8, 8, 8, 8, 8, 3
Lines Amount 43
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 143
Words per stanza (avg) 30

About this poem

A monster poem, about a creature that can only be seen in darkness.

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Written on September 11, 2020

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 07, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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