Analysis of THE THING OUTSIDE

Phil Roberts 1957 (Melbourne)



Something's lurking
Outside on your window sill,
Something truly evil.

Babadook?  Manticore?
Hippogriff, or unicorn?
All you know is fear.

Something is knocking
Upon your window pane.  The wind,
Or something more?

Something horrid
Whose visage alone can kill?
Or merely alley cat?

Something ghostly
Perhaps a bedroom sheet,
Or something terrifying.

Perhaps passing phantoms
Things from the Netherworld?
Or perhaps newsprint.

Something shimmering
Like a ghostly night light,
Ephemeral and strange.

Perhaps a newspaper
Reflecting innocent moonlight,
Or something dire.

Tucked up in your bed
You refuse to investigate,
Fearing the worst.

What is the thing outside?
Newspapers, bed sheets,
Or something appalling?

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABX CXC AXC XBX XXA XXX ADX CDC XXX XXA XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1010 1111101 101010 11 1110 11111 10110 01110101 1101 1010 1100111 110101 1010 01011 110100 011010 11010 1011 10100 101011 010001 01010 0101001 1101 11011 1011010 1001 110111 1011 110010 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 751
Words 114
Sentences 18
Stanzas 11
Stanza Lengths 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3, 3
Lines Amount 33
Letters per line (avg) 19
Words per line (avg) 4
Letters per stanza (avg) 58
Words per stanza (avg) 11

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Something's lurking Outside on your window sill, Something truly evil.

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Written on June 07, 2021

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 08, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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