Analysis of Life



The pain is so deep it makes me weep
Life is passing me by
I just want to cry
I could care less about all this mess
I feel invisible to everyone
Where's my gun?
Feeling insecure and unsure
My hearts been used
My minds been abused
Too much shit has gone on
How do I correct the wrong?
There is no one here to trust
Life has become a bust
Wishing I was how I use to be
That's when I was happy
Can't eat
Can't sleep
Feeling stressed and depressed
At the same tired feeling tired and wired
What will it take to feel fine
I'm so tired of this shit
Should just get it over with


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Poetic Form
Metre 011111111 111011 11111 111101111 110100110 111 10100001 1111 11101 111111 1110101 1111111 110101 101111111 111110 11 11 101001 101101010010 1111111 1110111 1111101
Closest metre Iambic trimeter
Characters 550
Words 119
Sentences 3
Stanzas 1
Stanza Lengths 22
Lines Amount 22
Letters per line (avg) 20
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 446
Words per stanza (avg) 119

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teenage feelings

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Submitted by hampton_mustang00 on June 08, 2021

Modified on May 01, 2023

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Justine Martindale

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