Analysis of ANTARCTIC WINDS



Icy winds blow in Melbourne
Nearly antarctically cold,
Cold enough to freeze blood solid
Enough to chill through to your soul.

Icy winds blow through the souls
Of those without homes to go to,
Shuffling slowly down Nicholson Street
Where the unemployed must queue.

Icy winds blow across the faces
Of queues of shuffling men,
Frozen near like living icebergs
Forced to live out in the open.

Through the winds of Melbourne’s West
The homeless masses shuffle,
Their faces set in silent screams
Screams that the wind has muffled.

Antarctic winds blow down Footscray’s Streets
Along Buckley, Barkly, Paisley
The living try to avoid the cold
But there’s nowhere left to flee.

So one by one they die outside
Alone in Footscray’s walks,
A victim of the icy cold
Which like a demon stalks.

Stalks those forced to live outside
And sleep down in Footscray Park,
A victim of Antarctic cold
Which sweeps in with the dark.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme XAXX XBXB XXXX XXXX XCAC DEAE DFAF XXX
Poetic Form
Metre 1011010 1011 10111110 01111111 1011101 11011111 101011001 100111 101101010 111101 10111010 11110010 101111 0101010 11010101 1101110 01011111 0110110 010110101 111111 11111111 01011 01010101 110101 1111111 011011 01010101 110101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 959
Words 167
Sentences 8
Stanzas 8
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 31
Letters per line (avg) 26
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 21

About this poem

A wonderful place in summer, Melbourne can be hellishly cold, and windy in winter.

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Written on July 28, 2008

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 13, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

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Phil Roberts

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