Analysis of THE CREEPER



In the darkened alleyways
In the absence of pure light,
A shadowy figure slowly creeps
Upon the cobblestones at night.

Across dark rooftops far above
Across the highest alley wall,
The shadow of a ghastly creature
‘Pon the paving stones doth fall.

A courting couple unawares
Hunted by a loathsome reaper,
Blissful in their ignorance
As from the shadows slinks the creeper.

Sibilant the deadly stalker
Creeps toward the courting twain,
And from the spot where lovers die
Seeps a deadly cupreous stain.

Soon a wandering vagabond
Stumbles ‘pon the blooded pair,
Then a shadow blacks the alley
From the creeper overhead.

In the morning passing children
Finding the mutilated three,
Protected by the burning sunlight
Screaming loud they turn and flee.

So a posse soon is set up
Hunting the area for the “man”,
A man they think the evil killer
The truth too hard to understand.

By nightfall, the posse rests
And so the creeper does awaken,
And after hunting through the night
Another innocent life is taken.

A lethal shadow in the night
Protected by the noxious dark,
The creeper sneaks slowly around
Hunting silent through a park.

Like a shadow full of venom
The creeper kills three vagabonds,
By the time the posse awakens
The deadly creeper more is gone.

Through the day the posse hunts
An evil reaper from foul dreams,
Until the night, in all its terror
Brings again tormented screams.

Through the night the creeper hunts
Thrilled by horror it delivers,
Exalting in the blood it spills
Delighted by the lives it’s riven.

Quick the death toll doth rise
And the creeper now must flee,
Back to the arms of Morpheus
Into the land of silent screams.

THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia


Scheme ABXB XCDC XDXD DEXE XXFX GFBF XXDX XGBG BHXH XXXX IJDJ IXXG XFAJ XXX
Poetic Form Tetractys  (20%)
Metre 001010 0010111 010010101 0101011 0111101 01010101 01101010 1010111 0101001 10101010 1001100 1101101 101010 1010101 01011101 101011 10100100 1010101 1011010 101101 00101010 1001001 01010101 1011101 10101111 100100101 011101010 0111101 110101 01011010 01010101 0101001110 0101001 01010101 0111001 1010101 1011110 0111100 101010010 0101111 1010101 11010111 010101110 101101 101011 11101010 01000111 010101110 101111 001111 110111 01011101 01 101010 100100010
Closest metre Iambic tetrameter
Characters 1,670
Words 294
Sentences 14
Stanzas 14
Stanza Lengths 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3
Lines Amount 55
Letters per line (avg) 25
Words per line (avg) 5
Letters per stanza (avg) 99
Words per stanza (avg) 21

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In the darkened alleyways In the absence of pure light, A shadowy figure slowly creeps Upon the cobblestones at night.

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Written on July 27, 2009

Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 16, 2021

Modified on March 05, 2023

1:28 min read
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Phil Roberts

I turn 65 on the 31st of January 2022. I love cats, rock music, and horror fiction and poetry more…

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