Analysis of THE NIGHT CREEPER
A dreadful being creeps
Through the dreams of sleeping folk,
Slashing, ripping, rending
Leaving victims rudely broke.
He creeps from dream to dream
To locate the perfect prey,
Someone who doesn’t see in time
And will not waken with the day.
A mindless corpse now sleeping
That’s all he leaves behind,
A working, breathing body
But without a living mind.
Comatose, his victims are
Taken to a hospital ward,
But then the creeper calls again
To sever their astral cord.
Their souls gone from their bodies
They are now the sleeping dead,
Victims of a loathsome creature
That every sleeper dreads.
He cannot hurt the waking
Only people fast asleep,
Through their dreams and nightmares
This malignant creature creeps.
He lives in nightmares and in dreams
And promises left unfulfilled,
He cannot hurt their living flesh
But their minds and souls he kills.
To leave an empty capsule
That was once a living person,
Now it’s just an empty shell
Their soul and being gone.
THE END
© Copyright 2021 Philip Roberts
Melbourne, Victoria, Australia
Scheme | ABCB XDXD CEXE XFXF XXXX CXXA XXXX XXXX XXX |
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Poetic Form | |
Metre | 010101 1011101 101010 1010101 111111 110011 111101 01110101 0101110 111101 0101010 1010101 101101 1010101 1101101 1101101 1111110 1110101 10101010 1100101 1101010 1010101 11101 1010101 1101001 0100101 11011101 1110111 1111010 11101010 1111101 110101 01 101010 100100010 |
Closest metre | Iambic tetrameter |
Characters | 1,006 |
Words | 175 |
Sentences | 9 |
Stanzas | 9 |
Stanza Lengths | 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 4, 3 |
Lines Amount | 35 |
Letters per line (avg) | 24 |
Words per line (avg) | 5 |
Letters per stanza (avg) | 93 |
Words per stanza (avg) | 19 |
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A dreadful being creeps Through the dreams of sleeping folk, Slashing, ripping, rending Leaving victims rudely broke.
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Written on May 14, 2011
Submitted by PHIL_ROBERTS on June 18, 2021
Modified on March 05, 2023
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